good writing and plot development can't wait to see what you have in store and how you wrap it all up. once again this is so good that if you published it as an ebook I would buy it.

Ironically, I had thought to suggest that Roger finds another of his uncle's clients and gets the trigger for that guy too, but I didn't include it in my suggestions since I couldn't think of any scenarios that weren't contrived. Seems you found one I hadn't thought of, so well done! Rather happy to see with what we've got going forward here. Michael looks like he's going to be a fun one to play around with, if only so that Roger can do some less pleasant stuff that the audience may like without it negatively affecting Phil. Stuff like making Roger into a man-dog who keeps licking at Phil's groin/ass, or constantly edging without being able to cum... or even just completely forgetting himself and turning into a butler for the duo. Turnabout is fair play after all, what with Michael being a bit of a fucker to Phil (that is, making Phil do the actions without giving him any incentives to enjoy it). I rather like the subtle line between Roger and Michael there, given both of them are taking advantage of Phil's trigger to get him to do things he otherwise wouldn't enjoy doing. However, as Phil himself put it, Michael annoys Phil while Roger made Phil feel wanted. Definitely going to be interesting to see what Roger does with those new triggers, though, and how it might affect the relationship with the wife and Stacy now that it seems they're going to be gone for a bit longer... I also rather liked how Roger considered talking to his uncle, but immediately disregarded the idea based on a bit of paranoia but some good logic. Roger has a good head on his shoulders. That said, I'm a little surprised that Roger's uncle is aware of Roger's bisexuality, since my impression was that Roger hadn't had a lot of experience with the male end of the spectrum to really be sure. Then again, he may have confided in his uncle at some point and was given some comforting advise or something, so it still checks out and gives a bit of a dynamic for Roger and his family. One idea for getting the trigger for Michael is to have Phil remember any phrases or words that Michael instructed Phil to never say or think of saying. After all, if Michael found out about Phil's trigger, he may have discovered his own. tldr: very much worth the wait, certainly not ruined at all.

Hi! I really like it! Maybe others are not that much into humiliation, but I love it. As the character of Madelieine said in 'Quills': "It's a fiction, not a moral treatise." There's another line about things that belong on paper that I'd like to quote, but I don't want to sound agressive to others. The point is, I don't see the problem with the bullies winning in a fiction work. It's all about erotic stories with dominion on it, so it work very well for most of us. The most appealing thing to me is the lost of self-respect and the respect of others, I like how Taron is turned on with the mocks of his students, it's a great description.

Very hot story! Good job, it's one of your hottest stories. I like how you describe the debasing of all the characters and the comparison of how they used to be respected. The only thing that disappoint me is that, unlike the rest of characters, Leo was not renamed in the end. Why was that? would had been fun to see Leo being renamed with something sexual or debasing, like Lewd, or Lump, or something by the way. Also, I would have liked if you told how he see himself in his new mindset. But out of that, it's a very hot story.

Amazing. Going to be re-reading a lot.

Don't let the comments get you down. This was hot af and I'm so glad it exists!

The ending is weird

As always, your stories never cease to amaze me, since you are making one of my fav kinks, old vs young, where the young is the top. Big sub small top. And I loved The chip, this one tho is more to my liking in the aspect that it has more mind control whether the other one has a solid plot and more defined characters. The fact you are continuing this story, makes me so happy <3 That being said, man, A new challenger approach and I hope he gets to know his trigger! But also hope that he fills like another of my kinks of big sub, like, being a black muscular dude, a personal taste so don't mind. Just like feet lol. Maybe when he gets the trigger he made him wear the lingerie instead and acts as the maid of the house? That sounds about right :D

Love the 'implanted Skinhead memories' & how they change your main characters current behaviors: Hope there's lots more of them...I Just can't wait for the next few chapters...Pleas hurry & release them !!!...You are my #1 favorite writer currently on this site !!! [I don't agree with Jemsea 13 however...I love it when a character is CLUELESS !]

wow really love the whole concept is there going to be a second chapter?