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5/25/20, 1:32 PM
Definitely was my cup of tea. It was well constructed and written. Keep up the good work.
5/25/20, 11:51 AM
@boi98229 thank you so much for this thorough and thoughtful comment! Honestly, I must have a bit of a praise kink because this kind of response is definitely what makes me want to keep going! Thanks especially for picking out some of your favourite details! My relationship with my partner (who I do still switch with at the moment!) is a little different than this, but many of the little physical details are taken from our play together. I'm hoping I can keep up the steam to write at least 3-4 more chapters in this story (structurally, that means a middle, another interstice, another chapter, and an ending) but we'll see how it goes! I'd like to revisit this universe again.
firesix
5/25/20, 11:47 AM
Fantastic work. Very hot and genuinely enthralling. I hope to see more soon. And I agree with ForgottenCradle... it's probably going to be twisted in the best way, which is just what I like, lol.
5/25/20, 11:14 AM
Gotta say I’ve been really into this story... but the dark end to this chapter kinda ‘softened’ my esteem...
Evan
5/25/20, 10:47 AM
Really excited to see you continue this. Thanks. Welcome back.
5/25/20, 10:18 AM
oh man,while I can totally understand Kit and his reservations I really hope he keeps going maybe one of these guys is a genuinely nice fit for him?
5/25/20, 10:01 AM
@Hypnothrill - Ah, yes, sorry about that. I forgot to add those tags.
5/25/20, 9:52 AM
oh,I like the inclusion of the chairman and the dean hope they'll get huge too
5/25/20, 9:47 AM
Like some of the other commenters, I thought this was well-written, but not my cup of tea. I was expecting something very different from the story description and tags. Since, as you say, the story is mostly about "complete powerlessness and degradation," it would have really helped to have included the "Humiliation" and "Domination" tags.
5/25/20, 9:37 AM
the coach sounds like a lovely bull I'd like to meet