Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/25/20, 5:54 AM
Good story! Hope the next chapter will be here soon! I wish I could have a boyfriend like that..
5/25/20, 5:43 AM
aww, this whole series is genuinely quite cute! keep up the good work!
5/25/20, 5:35 AM
These two make up the cutest couple ever!
Anonymous
5/25/20, 5:20 AM
Can't wait for the next part!
5/25/20, 4:49 AM
No wonder I was confused! Tonally, that ending is so much darker than the rest of the chapter, which is mostly about Jack and Steve's positive responses to being "upgraded" by the suits. I had just assumed that the suits were telling the truth when they said, "“Nick and Ben will be sent back to their own lives...They have served their purpose and will not be harmed." "
Ken
5/25/20, 4:43 AM
Really liking this story line. You could krrp it going for quite awhile. LOVE IT.
5/25/20, 4:17 AM
The story was well written but Jocks have more than enough power in the real world.
Zac
5/25/20, 4:14 AM
Definitely need a second chapter! Why not further the seduction or even have the hole seduce two straight students at the same time? Could be fun.
5/25/20, 4:12 AM
hot story are there more parts coming?
Zac
5/25/20, 4:04 AM
My favourite mc author. Love how you always pace the hypnosis and seduction so well. Can't wait for the next chapter of this and Hypnohole.