Recent Comments

5/24/20, 9:13 PM
This probably isn't what you intended, but the imagery in the final paragraph gives me the impression that Nick and Ben are dead. Still, I'm interested in seeing where this story goes next!
5/24/20, 9:09 PM
what a hot fucking story!! love the twist with chuck's body actually being into it without him realizing it, and also loved the fact that this big mountain of a man is squirming when he's confessing to kit. please write more and have something happen with chuck, I wanna see him become more submissive!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 7:45 PM
Good story, looking forward to reading more.
Anonymous
5/24/20, 7:40 PM
I loved how he starts his change with wanting to dance to German tech club music. That was funny! Good story!!
5/24/20, 7:04 PM
Leaves me wanting more.....
Anonymous
5/24/20, 6:13 PM
Maybe is because you were posting daily updates, but this waiting is driving me crazy! don't get me wrong, I respect your writing talents, take your time, but just wanted to say your loyal readers are still here!
RicanCub
5/24/20, 4:35 PM
excellent! cant wait for more!
5/24/20, 4:12 PM
“I’ll need to ditch the gas mask, so I’ll need you two to stay at least six feet behind me." HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (in all seriousness, great story. keep it up.)
5/24/20, 3:29 PM
Ok, ya gotta keep going on this amazing story! And really soon!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:27 PM
I kind of agree with Rotherham... I didnt feel rushed as much as it needed to be longer, more of the seduction, as if the victim wondered what it was he needed or more detail on what the changes felt like. It's not a criticism: it's a compliment that you've created a story people want more of. So now get to work and write a chapter 2 with more detail