Recent Comments

5/24/20, 12:10 AM
Ha ha, EJG speaks very well! I scanned this story and will admit that it is not for me, if only because I know there are people in this world who actually think like the jock students in this tale and believe the garbage they spout. :( But people are free to write what they wish, so I commend you on a story well-written! :D
M
5/23/20, 11:50 PM
this was a fascinating read. it seems like English isnt your only language and I noticed some word mis-uses that made it difficult to read on the first try. giving your work to an editor is something that no one should be ashamed of, and it will encourage a stronger reader response. please dont give up writing, as i said before this was a hot read, i would have liked to see more of the programing that Bryan experienced. like what commands did Thomas program into the white noise?
5/23/20, 11:43 PM
It begins. Liked this better than the last chapter. Positive reinforcement is the way to go. Maybe Hector should think about training Ivan for protection too. Put those muscles to use...aside from the ways he's already planned of course.
5/23/20, 11:39 PM
Sorry, this is late. I was on edge the whole time. Glad he got control back. Can't say I approve of the corporal punishment though. They say positive reinforcement is best for training pets.
EJG
5/23/20, 11:33 PM
Damn. For a submissive older fa**** like me,into dominant jock bullies, this so got me off. Was hoping for the students to gangbang the teacher. If this had those boys growing muscles/cock growth (a slight hint at the class taking up gym),even better. Don't EVER be put off by anyone here getting moody 'coz u said the F word. Made it hotter for me.
suitedsubmissive
5/23/20, 10:43 PM
as always, a well-written and well-plotted story!
5/23/20, 10:09 PM
I've heard it said many, many times that a large number of people in psychology get into it not to figure out what's wrong with others, but to figure out what's wrong with themselves. Peter *definitely* fits that mould, although he turned out to be quite good at figuring others out too, and so it became his career. That much I had in mind all along. What I figured out a bit later was that Peter's actions *do* all fit a certain pattern of behaviour, and since I realized that, I've made it a point for him to be consistent with that behaviour. (And if you're really paying attention, I even tell you what it is at one point.) There's no question that he's extremely self-centered, but as long as he's getting what he wants, he's definitely capable of some kind of feeling/sympathy for others. Although it'll still be the B-story, that'll be playing a bit more of a role in the series in the future, which I've also dropped hints about.
5/23/20, 9:05 PM
This was something different for sure. I like how you experimented with an idea you got and went with it. I really appreciate that.
TW
5/23/20, 8:51 PM
It's always refreshing to see a transformation happen to someone who wants it and seeing the transformation be even more powerful. looking forward to what happens to them and this possessed home!