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5/24/20, 4:06 AM
Very nice job; looking forward to the next part.
5/24/20, 3:55 AM
M, I have 2 native languages and 3 others I have been learning for some time now. Thanks for the review, I have revised it, thou I don't believe there was too many grammatical errors there were enough so I have edited it. I hope this new version is better.
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:14 AM
Great story! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:13 AM
Thoroughly entertaining! Even with all the German.
Anonymous
5/24/20, 3:12 AM
I like! A lot, too!!!!
Anonymous
5/24/20, 2:23 AM
Hot!p
5/24/20, 2:10 AM
This series is quite enjoyable to read, and I am happy that Todd finally got what he deserves, although I do wish that there was more of a happily ever after to the story. Thanks for the great read.
nycboot
5/24/20, 2:08 AM
Oh my. Well it's to be expected from one of the most experienced authors on this site. I love how portray Hugh's confusion by asking all these questions, trying to understand what's happening. When that by itself is incredibly hot.....well, that's an author who's a master at his craft.
5/24/20, 1:21 AM
loved it! wish there was more! i guess that means time for a part 2
5/24/20, 12:38 AM
Nice premise but it feels a tad rushed (a problem i have with my works so don't worry). It might be better to see Seb see the guy's kinks, desires and fears to make his changes more ironic. I'd also like to see why Seb does all this, is there a backstory or is he made of evil? Carry on the good work!