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suitedsubmissive
5/23/20, 1:13 AM
goddamn, i wish this would happen to me!
suitedsubmissive
5/23/20, 1:11 AM
fucking brilliant story! i love transformation fiction and works like this drive me wild...
5/23/20, 12:58 AM
A major issue with section lines rendered this episode hard to read, for which I apologise. I have corrected this by adding headings for each part. As for the point about Rashid's parents - I might have got into serious trouble for following that story line...
5/23/20, 12:52 AM
please continue this!!!
suitedsubmissive
5/23/20, 12:49 AM
made my tiny white collar dick shoot so hard, Sir!
Anonymous
5/23/20, 12:29 AM
Those five homophobic jocks aren't the only ones that made Rashid suicide, but Rashid's parents also have a hand in it. The jocks may bully him for sometimes but the parents would bully him for life for being gay, thus Rashid had felt so terrified being forced to come out. So Edmund had missing out on some more worthy targets for his revenge: the parents.
5/23/20, 12:26 AM
I really thought the story was awesome but I just want to say that the ending was very lackluster for me. I didn't get any satisfaction or excitement from it.
5/23/20, 12:07 AM
Pretty interesting story though I wish the protangainst was the one who hypnoed the students rather than being played with himself. (The moment he is all like 'he didn't hypnotize me' I was like 'I'm calling bullshit on that'. hehe) But yeah its a well written fun story.
5/22/20, 11:54 PM
Dude! This is fucking hot! Hope this one is a good ending story XP Would love to find out how the story proceeds with their relationship
Dec 7, 2019
Anonymous
5/22/20, 9:55 PM
Really love the result that Coach cums out the first sixteen years of his life, basically turning John into his past.