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5/22/20, 8:39 PM
this is really awesome! You should totally continue this story!
May 22, 2020
5/22/20, 8:37 PM
@Willie Cici, my pleasure. Always look out for your work. Got to be one of the most prolific writers, I wish I had your flow, and stamina :-)
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5/22/20, 7:42 PM
I'm SO looking forward to another baby focused chapter. the mind fuck involved that gets a grown man into a nappy to make his boom boom just ... god that's so intense!
5/22/20, 7:12 PM
cool story
5/22/20, 6:24 PM
For what its worth, the brief hypnosis moments were really hot. Seeing how Peters magic affects the guys even when hes not there to direct it. Totally understand the need for build up and backstory heavy chapters to make the truly erotic chapters even better. Cheers to your excellent writing skills.
May 22, 2020
Willie Cici
5/22/20, 2:25 PM
I am intrigued to read the rest of this series. Well-written and good foundation. (And I'm not saying this because of the shout-out, although you put a smile on a weary face!) Keep at it. I'll be reading!!!
5/22/20, 2:16 PM
This is a really great chapter. I feel like it develops Jeff more and is similar to one of The Influencers stories, where the effects of hypnosis/mind control are explored more realistically instead of just sex fantasies. While I was expecting a plain hypno sex fantasies, I surprisingly enjoyed seeing that Peter actually cares for Jeff and the rest of his ..harem? and it made the characters feel more real to me. Thank you for writing this and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
5/22/20, 2:09 PM
awesome work five ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
5/22/20, 12:25 PM
this was a really interesting chapter. really showed in depth how Jeff's mind is scrambled by Peter's absence and now that he's back I'm excited to see of Peter learned something and operates differently now or if it goes back to normal/the way it was before
May 22, 2020
5/22/20, 11:43 AM
@Onix, Glad that I did. You're one of the main reasons I started writing these stories in the first place. :-)