awesome work five ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

this was a really interesting chapter. really showed in depth how Jeff's mind is scrambled by Peter's absence and now that he's back I'm excited to see of Peter learned something and operates differently now or if it goes back to normal/the way it was before

@Onix, Glad that I did. You're one of the main reasons I started writing these stories in the first place. :-)

thanks for the shout out 🏋️😎💪

A GREAT STORY, as usual! I love the way you made the characters feel alive and the development that Jeff had has been amazing. can't wait for the next chapter already!

Some of the more triggering segments I had to skim, but the overall chapter was breathtaking! We come full circle to Jeff and we can really see the depth of emotional investment Peter has for him. It's so awesome to have that nuance defined for the audience, his dedication to diagnosis, his insistence on treatment, his admission of fault, as well as his verbal planning for the contingency of if Jeff ever needed to leave Peter. I really needed to see that, it adds a depth to Peter that makes him a more rounded person, one with empathy and having a sense of responsibility. I'm extremely on board with the turn of the story, it really did need this aspect of Peter's arrest acknowledged, and I look forward to more of WoT as you see fit to grace us with it, or indeed any of your writings. Hats off to you sir.

It was indeed a MBMBAM reference. That snippet of dialogue where the bros were talking was taken almost word for word from one of their ad spots where they went off on there own little tangent. It gave me this idea, and I just couldn't let a good burst of inspiration pass me by.

While most of my chapters and stories are indeed erotic, I don't aim for all my stories to be erotic in every chapter. In point of fact, one of my future stories is likely to be more of a blend of sci-fi and sex/dominance...at least if I can pull it off. I'm not sure I can. Writing it as pure pornography wouldn't do it justice. As far as this chapter, it was planned to be this way almost from the moment I wrote that Peter was arrested. My original concept of it was actually a #nosex chapter. It was meant to bring out Jeff's character as something different from the others...not just another toy. That's been part of his backstory since Day 1, though it wasn't really referenced as much as it probably should've been. I didn't think it was enough to just say that Peter loved Jeff once or twice, and then only have him casually pop in here and there after that as a tertiary character. Peter's absence should (and did) alter the lives of all his subjects fairly significantly, but most especially his partner's. Writing that "everything was fine and they all had lots of sex" would have been very weak writing, as would "they all went back to normal overnight and they were all just friends until Peter came back". Just ignoring what happened to everyone while Peter was away and not writing about it at all also seemed like a pretty bad plan. The story itself basically demanded that something happen, and it wasn't something I felt should be glossed over. To your point, though, the next chapter will be my traditional erotic fare, followed by another less-erotic chapter (Timmy's journal). It won't be entirely sex free, but what sex there is probably won't be all that hypnotically gratifying. Everything I have planned after that is more traditionally erotic/hypnotic along with some story-telling, of course. I also do have some other stories that I'd like to work on, some shorter and some longer. And lastly, Edlam recently picked up one of my old, orphaned stories and wrote an ending for it, so that collab should be coming soonish as well. I'm not sure exactly when, as I know he's really busy with real-life right now.

Say, this is great! Lots of fun transformations (I have a weakness for cute twinks, too). There are some grammar issues (tense changes, missing apostrophes), but the meat of the story is fantastic. Way to go! :)

I love the opening, can't wait to see where it goes! Alex sounds so much like me for my whole youth too, it's like looking in a mirror