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5/22/20, 6:11 AM
Ok, there are transformation stories, and then there is THIS transformation story. It's an odd story because there really are no victims -- everyone is made better with the changes. Baphomet takes the reader on a wild ride that starts the moment that he opens chapter one, and increases in intensity until his unexpectedly happy ending. His narrative is flawless. It balances three characters off each other nicely, which is not an easy thing to do. He had me from the moment the chinos came off and the rubber came on. The story moves at a rapid clip -- maybe too rapid. I would have not objected for Baphomet to have "fleshed" things out a little more -- juicing more out of Martin's situation such as the physicality (sights, sounds, smells) of the transformation. For example, the smells and feeling of getting body coated in latex merited more. Full body inking as well as the other extreme body mods could have been richly exploited. Too bad these are hidden in hypnosis. But, honestly, I could not have asked for better than this piece to settle in with during a long, lonesome pandemic. For now, Baphomet looks like the "the new sheriff in town."
5/22/20, 6:04 AM
You're a terrific writer, and I think you do a great job of getting inside Jeff's head. That said, I didn't find the story very sexy at all, and I feel like the "Web of Trust" series might have reached a point where it's morphing from erotic fiction to an ongoing soap opera. I can feel the love you have for this set of characters, but I'd love to see you experiment with some new stories (maybe even some shorter-form stories!)
May 20, 2020
Frstone
5/22/20, 5:47 AM
i always fantasized about something like this,where both of the guys actually likes and consented to be hypnotized! most of the other stories involves forcing a str8 guy, which i hate. also i really love the freeze part :)
5/22/20, 5:32 AM
would love to read more!
5/22/20, 5:10 AM
fantastic as per usual. keep up the good work.
5/22/20, 4:16 AM
Great start with some fun changes! Keep it up :)
May 22, 2020
5/22/20, 3:56 AM
Really hood beginning for a fetish tale.
May 22, 2020
Letthepigout
5/22/20, 3:43 AM
really cool beginning! looking forward to what comes next:)
5/22/20, 3:35 AM
man you understand how to make me hard; all the mods - gosh that is SEXY. It makes me want more extreme piercings - HOT
Moby
5/22/20, 3:35 AM
This is awesome~