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12/24/24, 6:05 AM
Fantastic! Cannot wait for more!

12/24/24, 9:55 AM
@[JRDicks69](/user/show/918362) Thanks ❤️
12/24/24, 7:15 AM
Brutal and sexy.
12/24/24, 6:38 AM
Awesome beginning--and thank heaven you're back. Your father & son stories are the best and "Bonding" is perhaps my favorite story of all time. I see from your reading habits that you enjoy the stories of the marvelous Eigh (aka anonymous here on Gay Spiral Stories) whose Sleeper Cell and Hypnosis in the News are my favorites, too. Plus you like the great writing of Hypnothrill RobinHood70, MSTGay3000 as I do. Please, please add many more chapters to his promising story, as soon as you can. Like 18 more! Thank you, thank you, thank you
Anonymous
12/24/24, 5:37 AM
So hot and I agree with the other comments. This needs another chapter with his teammates interacting with him. I love your content and easily the best author on this entire site! I wish you shared pictures that go with your story as well especially from your previous work “The Wrestler”.
12/24/24, 5:04 AM
Very interesting... want to read more :3
12/24/24, 3:51 AM
More please.
The Sugar Cat
12/23/24, 10:53 PM
This story is great. Like the way the humiliation element is slowly being ramped up, with Dimitri attempting to rebel against Victor's dominance. Of course it ends with his bigger butt into some ridiculous looking underwear, but it's the thought that counts. A ruggedly handsome muscleman brought to his knees by a flamboyant old man in a suit is a pretty hot scenario in my book. I like the way clothing works in this story, drawing attention to his weight gain while enhancing his pleasure. Everything seems just a little tight, making it impossible for Dimitri or anyone else to ignore
12/23/24, 10:30 PM
awesome chapter cant wait for more

12/23/24, 10:50 PM
@[hypnoguy69](/user/show/13566) Thanks. I’ll try to keep’em coming.
Lampshade15
12/23/24, 7:41 PM
This was great, I'd love to read more!
Anonymous
12/22/24, 1:07 PM
So hot! Waited for part 2 for so long and exceeded all expectations. Will there be another ending? In any way really enjoyed the story.

12/23/24, 3:45 AM
@Anonymous I haven't planned a third ending, but if an idea comes to me, there's always the possibility.

12/23/24, 4:42 AM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) Heh, I kind of agree that I'd like a third ending as well. Maybe something in the middle of these two? Where they find a happy medium and are both verse?

12/23/24, 9:48 AM
@[TaylorGuy](/user/show/10000710) I did think of writing that as a third. It'd be sweet and cute, but not particularly interesting. If I can think of a way to make it interesting, I'll write it. I'm more likely to write one where they both end up as bottoms, because its exactly what neither of them wanted lol

12/23/24, 4:21 PM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) Sometimes sweet and cute is good though! But both of them becoming bottoms also sounds interesting. Or maybe one were one of them takes all the others dick, which results in some weirdness?

Anonymous
12/23/24, 7:39 PM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) Could make them equal height and equal cock size. So Ben would grow and Jason would grow down there. Maybe they'd try a sex pose where they each can fuck each other at the same time. But with two bottoms version can continue from Jason being too small to get his dick back that he gets another guy to top Ben when he fucks him and he'd tell him about the ritual. Anyway really hot story.