Recent Comments

6/10/20, 4:49 AM
Intriguing start! Would like to see where this goes...
Anonymous
6/10/20, 2:56 AM
Agree very much with the first comment. Great writing of self-debasement and obliviousness... not to mention the twist at the end with Captain.
Anonymous
6/10/20, 1:03 AM
Really hot! Would love to see more
6/10/20, 12:24 AM
At first, I didn't like that you introduced Leo into the story. Pine's jocked up male slave world was so perfect, I wanted nothing to mess it up. I like your point that you wanted to mix it up instead of just enslaving one guy to the next. That said, I really liked the Leo factor in this. It was hot and it was a bit dark too. You portrayed the sense of urgency well as Pine rushed for the registration form.
Jai
6/9/20, 11:38 PM
Hot!! Good to see my name well used :)
6/9/20, 11:25 PM
ready for the next chapter
Anonymous
6/9/20, 10:50 PM
I keep coming back to these Flesh Lab stories. Please let there be more!
Jai
6/9/20, 10:45 PM
I would have preferred him to be conscious for the transformations. But otherwise the subject matter was great.
6/9/20, 10:16 PM
hope you continue this story. could be really interesting.
Captainlordgallifrey
6/9/20, 10:08 PM
Unique idea and very fun story. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.