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Senpai
5/18/20, 4:08 PM
Man, things are getting good. I really wanna see how Hawkeye is turned...
5/18/20, 4:05 PM
This looks like a great start to a great relationship. Can't wait to read more chapters.
May 17, 2020
Anonymous
5/18/20, 3:46 PM
really hot !
May 17, 2020
5/18/20, 2:00 PM
this is amazing!
5/18/20, 1:52 PM
I love the way this story stays in Thor’s head and pulls us all into the overwhelming pleasure of submission. Unbelievably hot—I can’t wait to read more.
5/18/20, 12:27 PM
Actually, with the exception of a few works like Jane Eyre, Victorian novelists loved presenting stories from multiple viewpoints. Think of Dracula, or the epistolary novels of Wilkie Collins, or even Jane Austen's own early epistolary novella "Lady Susan." And don't get me started on novels with multiple embedded narrators, like Emily Bronte's Wuthering Heights. What makes your story a little different from those, I think, is the way you're quickly jumping between different time-frames and locations (and not keeping to a strict chronological order). That aspect feels very cinematic!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/18/20, 11:13 AM
Where do I sign up for a session in this device?
5/18/20, 10:56 AM
Thanks, as always, for your positive comments nycboot. I think that jump-cuts are required when multiple viewpoints are involved. It may be to do with the cinema, but I also think that writing has evolved since the Victorian novel when an entire work would be written only from the perspective of the central character. Jane Eyre comes to mind. I think that a modern version of this novel might also include chapters written from the point of view of Rochester and perhaps even Mrs Reed or the mad woman in the attic. I'm not sure that this means that writing is dead. It perhaps means that readers expect to experience issues from more than one viewpoint. There is also a certain skill involved in presenting the perspective of varying characters authentically. Most of Dickens' narrators were young men, rather like he was in his youth. He obviously felt comfortable writing from that viewpoint. Jane Austen's protagonists are all young women for the same presumed reason. To me, the real test is putting yourself in the skin of someone who is different from you and managing to pull that off in a believable way.
May 17, 2020
ThatOneGuy
5/18/20, 9:14 AM
Damn this was hot! Knew it would be though, being from you.
5/18/20, 8:39 AM
Please say there's more to this story! I was hoping Dr Bryant would get dosed, I want to find out how he reacts to the drug. Anyone who's been dosed themselves, I'm a willing depository for your bodily fluids 🤤