Recent Comments

6/9/20, 9:54 PM
at least we have established shutdown protocols . also it will allow us for the nanites to both on their own as well as once he gets a clue change what they're doing .
6/9/20, 9:22 PM
very hot ;) need more superhero hypno stories honestly
Muscle-Flex
6/9/20, 9:04 PM
This series is hot. Love the way that Andrew's domination and control of Danny and Chris is extensively described. Great humiliated and frustrated dialogue from Danny and Chris too.
6/9/20, 9:04 PM
loved it.
6/9/20, 8:50 PM
Greenwood? That was where -I think it's him- Kevin went at the end of getting the farmers! What happened there? I'm so excited!!!
Anonymous
6/9/20, 8:40 PM
Fun and full of potential!
6/9/20, 8:18 PM
Well, so much interest! Thank you all so much for reading and enjoying and taking the time to post your comments. I'll be working on chapter two, and possibly beyond, very soon.
6/9/20, 8:11 PM
Hey Man. Good to see your work!
Anonymous
6/9/20, 8:00 PM
i love this story! Is there a chance for continuation? Just one chapter is too short for this hot guys!
6/9/20, 7:34 PM
yes! a series please!!