Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/17/20, 8:23 PM
Agreed! Really hope you see this through to the end.
May 17, 2020
nycboot
5/17/20, 8:02 PM
Lots of fun!
May 17, 2020
Somnus
5/17/20, 7:37 PM
This is is great material. I came 3 times before i finished it.
Mac
5/17/20, 6:49 PM
great story idea and I am looking forward to more!
nycboot
5/17/20, 6:42 PM
And you slowly reveal more and more of what's in store. Great story-telling as always!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 6:15 PM
Great piece, although it feels a little short. Hopefully that’s a sign that there’s more to cum ;) And thanks for going through and doing the proofread people were asking for. I skimmed over it a few hours ago and the mistakes broke the immersion, but with the additional care you’ve now put in the story shines much better :)
Anonymous
5/17/20, 5:39 PM
The buildup in the story is really good, as is seeing the characters slowly transform!
5/17/20, 5:14 PM
Thanks much, guys. I have plans for Lan & Thor! Stand by!
boi98229
5/17/20, 4:46 PM
Great story! i loved the whole concept and transition, and agree with others' comments above. The only thing i wish could be more detailed and based on reality would be description of how Earl managed the mind control. i expect that's just a pipe dream, but one i would so like to really experience, especially with a hot intelligent guy like Earl!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 4:38 PM
I'm with Mutabear, I sincerely hope that there is more to come and we can find out what happens to Hanson. Keep up the good work and thank you for posting this.