Recent Comments

Mac
5/17/20, 6:49 PM
great story idea and I am looking forward to more!
nycboot
5/17/20, 6:42 PM
And you slowly reveal more and more of what's in store. Great story-telling as always!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 6:15 PM
Great piece, although it feels a little short. Hopefully that’s a sign that there’s more to cum ;) And thanks for going through and doing the proofread people were asking for. I skimmed over it a few hours ago and the mistakes broke the immersion, but with the additional care you’ve now put in the story shines much better :)
Anonymous
5/17/20, 5:39 PM
The buildup in the story is really good, as is seeing the characters slowly transform!
5/17/20, 5:14 PM
Thanks much, guys. I have plans for Lan & Thor! Stand by!
boi98229
5/17/20, 4:46 PM
Great story! i loved the whole concept and transition, and agree with others' comments above. The only thing i wish could be more detailed and based on reality would be description of how Earl managed the mind control. i expect that's just a pipe dream, but one i would so like to really experience, especially with a hot intelligent guy like Earl!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 4:38 PM
I'm with Mutabear, I sincerely hope that there is more to come and we can find out what happens to Hanson. Keep up the good work and thank you for posting this.
May 17, 2020
5/17/20, 4:12 PM
@FeedYourHead, funny enough, I've never seen "Nightmare on Elm Street," so that wasn't a conscious reference. But I did have a number of influences, including AgainstMyWill's "Boypussy" and this NSFW short film: https://vimeo.com/196620429.
5/17/20, 4:04 PM
Very hot! please post more soon, you need to proof read your stuff or get someone to do it for you.
May 17, 2020
5/17/20, 3:42 PM
The King returns! This was amazingly hot, Hypnothrill. Wooo! (Love the "Nightmare on Elm Street" references, too!)