Recent Comments

Ken
5/18/20, 12:15 AM
LOVED the entire story line and all the chapters. Are you going to continue? Knowing now with the finale and building and other chips, you could go anywhere with this. So I do hope you do.
M
5/17/20, 10:39 PM
Such a hot story. I cant wait to read the next chapter!
EntrancedGay92
5/17/20, 9:43 PM
Glad we had this chat and bounced ideas off each other 🙂 The end result is amazing!
5/17/20, 8:47 PM
I've never commented on a story before but I felt the need to express my gratitude. your story is incredible and I laughed really hard a couple times. perhaps you should consider a series where they could get hired out to take revenge on bullies. Could include the main character as the victim who helps perpetuate the downfall of the bullies. just a bunch of my random thoughts.
Anonymous
5/17/20, 8:23 PM
Agreed! Really hope you see this through to the end.
May 17, 2020
nycboot
5/17/20, 8:02 PM
Lots of fun!
May 17, 2020
Somnus
5/17/20, 7:37 PM
This is is great material. I came 3 times before i finished it.
Mac
5/17/20, 6:49 PM
great story idea and I am looking forward to more!
nycboot
5/17/20, 6:42 PM
And you slowly reveal more and more of what's in store. Great story-telling as always!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 6:15 PM
Great piece, although it feels a little short. Hopefully that’s a sign that there’s more to cum ;) And thanks for going through and doing the proofread people were asking for. I skimmed over it a few hours ago and the mistakes broke the immersion, but with the additional care you’ve now put in the story shines much better :)