Recent Comments

M
5/17/20, 10:39 PM
Such a hot story. I cant wait to read the next chapter!
EntrancedGay92
5/17/20, 9:43 PM
Glad we had this chat and bounced ideas off each other 🙂 The end result is amazing!
5/17/20, 8:47 PM
I've never commented on a story before but I felt the need to express my gratitude. your story is incredible and I laughed really hard a couple times. perhaps you should consider a series where they could get hired out to take revenge on bullies. Could include the main character as the victim who helps perpetuate the downfall of the bullies. just a bunch of my random thoughts.
Anonymous
5/17/20, 8:23 PM
Agreed! Really hope you see this through to the end.
May 17, 2020
nycboot
5/17/20, 8:02 PM
Lots of fun!
May 17, 2020
Somnus
5/17/20, 7:37 PM
This is is great material. I came 3 times before i finished it.
Mac
5/17/20, 6:49 PM
great story idea and I am looking forward to more!
nycboot
5/17/20, 6:42 PM
And you slowly reveal more and more of what's in store. Great story-telling as always!
Anonymous
5/17/20, 6:15 PM
Great piece, although it feels a little short. Hopefully that’s a sign that there’s more to cum ;) And thanks for going through and doing the proofread people were asking for. I skimmed over it a few hours ago and the mistakes broke the immersion, but with the additional care you’ve now put in the story shines much better :)
Anonymous
5/17/20, 5:39 PM
The buildup in the story is really good, as is seeing the characters slowly transform!