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Fishboy
12/22/24, 6:28 PM
Just fantastic writing! Thanks for posting this!
Mind bender
12/22/24, 3:59 PM
Love it, and is open ended so if you ever want to add to it. I love this series. Thank you for writing it 😊. It would be so cool of quitin as the djinn could hypnotized Sanjay.
hairyartist
12/22/24, 3:21 PM
so awesome, thank you Man!!
12/22/24, 3:18 PM
Thanks, man. Great read.
12/22/24, 3:16 PM
WOW! just a great story.
Karl
11/19/24, 7:22 PM
Love this ending!!! Really enjoyed the entire series, great job writing this!

Anonymous
12/22/24, 12:38 PM
@Karl Agreed - what a great ending!
Anonymous
12/22/24, 12:19 PM
I’m a huge fan of your work, Jack Parker. But I’m a bit lost in this story. 😅 It’s hot but I have no clue what’s going on anymore. Loved the chapter when Beast Boy lobotomises himself. So so hot. But then he, like other characters before him, just disappears and we’re left with no clue what the grand plan is and why these heroes are being taken out. Hope we get to find out and also meet some of the already corrupted characters again.

12/22/24, 12:21 PM
@[Anonymous](/user/show/918834) This is all a grand plan by Raj to take over the world and is a series of stories showing how he is taking each one down. You can assume the captured heroes are being used and abused by Raj’s men happily.
Dec 21, 2024
12/22/24, 11:18 AM
Good start!
Dec 21, 2024
12/22/24, 10:29 AM
Wow. Just ... wow. This is absolutely amazing.
12/22/24, 9:25 AM
I do love this story