Recent Comments

5/16/20, 1:07 PM
Sorry to report that, over the past two months, I’ve lost momentum and enthusiasm for completing this story. I did have another chapter partially written and the rest of the story sketched out in notes, which I've [posted in the forum](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/reflex-unfinished/1462). If anyone feels like finishing the story, either following my notes or going in their own direction, that's fine with me.
5/16/20, 12:58 PM
as someone who recently modded his Sims game I can relate to the feeling of power XD I really hope it's daddy's turn in one of the future chapters
5/16/20, 12:53 PM
I like this chapter. And thanks for updating so quickly!!
5/16/20, 12:12 PM
will you do more please? also it would be fun to see the father or one of the teachers become a power bottom
Anonymous
5/16/20, 12:10 PM
I agree with forgottencradle lol But even tho they're short, they are packed with sexy mind control
Anonymous
5/16/20, 11:49 AM
Can't wait for more
5/16/20, 11:38 AM
I've been following the chip series religiously, so I'm very excited to see you return to this for a change! as for suggestions, I really don't want Phil made to be more feminine. you're literally the only writer on this site that writes older, big masculine men, falling under the control of guys much younger and smaller than them. there are just not enough stories that will have the sub be this masculine man. I think it should stay that way. I think Phil should be made to fully explore his submissive side, as in, bondage, edging, spanking, verbal, anal play, etc Thank you again for all your work! you're one of the best
Anonymous
5/16/20, 11:14 AM
I don't drink coffee but the others are right, unless there is a reason like, he is to drink from a baby's bottle. Restricting coffee is a bit too far. With that being said, the story was hot. Perhaps add a second a chapter as this is a great story.
5/16/20, 11:05 AM
I'm loving this series. Another hot chapter!
5/16/20, 10:56 AM
I love this! Nice to see a sweet-natured dom, and the enchanted poetry is fun, too. :)