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5/15/20, 3:10 PM
beautiful underrated series! I cant wait for the entire town to become slaves
jul
5/15/20, 2:04 PM
Good story. I'd love to read a second part or similar story. I like sweet endings.
5/15/20, 1:19 PM
This is really a hot and good story with a fitting punishment, I only wished that he had made them do what they begged they would do for him not to make them post the videos online, especially the toilet licking.
5/15/20, 1:08 PM
would love to see what happens when he get s back to the police station with the perp
May 4, 2020
5/15/20, 8:09 AM
Wow, this is hoooot, plees more
5/15/20, 7:47 AM
This was a chapter I had rewritten about five times, and so it still ended up being pretty muddled. I think I was a little overzealous with my setting this go round. Hopefully next chapter will come out better.
5/15/20, 7:33 AM
To be honest, I decided to not read this sequel at first because I thought it was gonna go dark. Don't get me wrong, I love the first series, but it got too dark for me. That said, I'm glad that I read this after it's complete and now that it has a 'good' ending. The mind control scenes are hot as always and kudos to you for creating this whole lore behind their abilities.It feels like we were there at the academy with them! Looking forward to your next stories!
5/15/20, 6:33 AM
Love it πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™ I just wonder a couple of things... I get that Chester's fate is ambiguous on propose, but what about his family? I mean they lost all they have (including their free will) because the 'evil Todd but know with Lane's direction, they recover something??? I also wonder about Shawn, I know he is practically Todd sex slave, but with the change... os Todd still using Shawn like that? Or they became a couple (since I don't think neither Lane or Todd will kind of free the real Shawn)? It was a rollercoaster of story, sometimes what I think will happen, eventually happen... others I got a big surprise... I love it... you still one of my favorite authors here πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™ I hope to read more of you in the future :3
5/15/20, 6:08 AM
Your stories are always a guilty pleasure of mine because I usually aren't into stuff like this. But the amount of control you need to have over someone to pull that off is just intoxicating
5/15/20, 5:53 AM
:O WHAT?!!!!!! amazing I was expecting a winner after this last battle... but this took me by surprise!!!! Amazing story... a good way to end in kind of the same situation for the characters but still a change... I love it πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™