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5/15/20, 5:53 AM
:O WHAT?!!!!!! amazing I was expecting a winner after this last battle... but this took me by surprise!!!! Amazing story... a good way to end in kind of the same situation for the characters but still a change... I love it 💙💙💙💙
Silas
5/15/20, 4:54 AM
This is so crazy! A few days ago I started writing a story (also after an extended hiatus) that is almost beat by beat identical to this.
5/15/20, 4:18 AM
WOW! This Epilogue is awesome! Love that Todd is actually being nice now--and ha ha, his comment about still being chancellor, despite having literally no power, is perfect (he just wanted to have people THINK he's important). I do wonder what the future holds for these characters--does Andrew win the election? And will Lane's "better place" ideas really be better? Qui custodiet ipsem custodies? ;p
5/15/20, 4:10 AM
HOORAY! TODD LOST! :p Sorry, but that's my gut reaction. I was pretty nervous when his powers came back, but Nathan's sacrifice was a great way to return. Now, of course, the question remains--will Lane actually be decent?...
bucke
5/15/20, 4:05 AM
Great job! I really liked the political twist at the end, I was not expecting that and I loved it. It's been a journey reading two novels, effectively, (both this series and the original) and it has been a treat. I also wondered what happened to Chester, was he still at the school in the end ?
nycboot
5/15/20, 2:45 AM
Wow, what a story and an appropriate ending that really did function as a balance to the extreme build-up. I guessed that it would resemble the Good Boy story with Lane taking over, and my sense that it was a political commentary also seems to have come true. You didn't kill off Todd, but he basically had a mental lobotomy so I guess that's almost as good. At least Nathan gave voice to my total disgust with Todd. I guess the original Nathan's pining for Joe went nowhere. And as fun as the original Dylan character was, I agree with Lane that his talents can be channeled into something more constructive. One loose end: What of poor Chester? Maybe he became Andrew's communications guy? ;)
5/15/20, 2:32 AM
OMG, I'm shedding a few tears at the ending. Truly an amazing piece of work between the two parts of this story. You've created the masterpiece and masterwork of this site with your partners. Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful piece with us.
5/15/20, 2:31 AM
Congratz on finishing your series, and good luck to your future endeavors.
Anonymous
5/15/20, 2:28 AM
So hooot. both chapters are. Cant wait to see what other trouble they get into :P. maybe all 3 can have some fuun together :).
5/15/20, 2:08 AM
SO HAPPY YOU'RE BACK!