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May 4, 2020
5/15/20, 8:09 AM
Wow, this is hoooot, plees more
5/15/20, 7:47 AM
This was a chapter I had rewritten about five times, and so it still ended up being pretty muddled. I think I was a little overzealous with my setting this go round. Hopefully next chapter will come out better.
5/15/20, 7:33 AM
To be honest, I decided to not read this sequel at first because I thought it was gonna go dark. Don't get me wrong, I love the first series, but it got too dark for me. That said, I'm glad that I read this after it's complete and now that it has a 'good' ending. The mind control scenes are hot as always and kudos to you for creating this whole lore behind their abilities.It feels like we were there at the academy with them! Looking forward to your next stories!
5/15/20, 6:33 AM
Love it 💙💙💙💙 I just wonder a couple of things... I get that Chester's fate is ambiguous on propose, but what about his family? I mean they lost all they have (including their free will) because the 'evil Todd but know with Lane's direction, they recover something??? I also wonder about Shawn, I know he is practically Todd sex slave, but with the change... os Todd still using Shawn like that? Or they became a couple (since I don't think neither Lane or Todd will kind of free the real Shawn)? It was a rollercoaster of story, sometimes what I think will happen, eventually happen... others I got a big surprise... I love it... you still one of my favorite authors here 💙💙💙💙💙 I hope to read more of you in the future :3
5/15/20, 6:08 AM
Your stories are always a guilty pleasure of mine because I usually aren't into stuff like this. But the amount of control you need to have over someone to pull that off is just intoxicating
5/15/20, 5:53 AM
:O WHAT?!!!!!! amazing I was expecting a winner after this last battle... but this took me by surprise!!!! Amazing story... a good way to end in kind of the same situation for the characters but still a change... I love it 💙💙💙💙
Silas
5/15/20, 4:54 AM
This is so crazy! A few days ago I started writing a story (also after an extended hiatus) that is almost beat by beat identical to this.
5/15/20, 4:18 AM
WOW! This Epilogue is awesome! Love that Todd is actually being nice now--and ha ha, his comment about still being chancellor, despite having literally no power, is perfect (he just wanted to have people THINK he's important). I do wonder what the future holds for these characters--does Andrew win the election? And will Lane's "better place" ideas really be better? Qui custodiet ipsem custodies? ;p
5/15/20, 4:10 AM
HOORAY! TODD LOST! :p Sorry, but that's my gut reaction. I was pretty nervous when his powers came back, but Nathan's sacrifice was a great way to return. Now, of course, the question remains--will Lane actually be decent?...
bucke
5/15/20, 4:05 AM
Great job! I really liked the political twist at the end, I was not expecting that and I loved it. It's been a journey reading two novels, effectively, (both this series and the original) and it has been a treat. I also wondered what happened to Chester, was he still at the school in the end ?