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5/15/20, 4:10 AM
HOORAY! TODD LOST! :p Sorry, but that's my gut reaction. I was pretty nervous when his powers came back, but Nathan's sacrifice was a great way to return. Now, of course, the question remains--will Lane actually be decent?...
bucke
5/15/20, 4:05 AM
Great job! I really liked the political twist at the end, I was not expecting that and I loved it. It's been a journey reading two novels, effectively, (both this series and the original) and it has been a treat. I also wondered what happened to Chester, was he still at the school in the end ?
nycboot
5/15/20, 2:45 AM
Wow, what a story and an appropriate ending that really did function as a balance to the extreme build-up. I guessed that it would resemble the Good Boy story with Lane taking over, and my sense that it was a political commentary also seems to have come true. You didn't kill off Todd, but he basically had a mental lobotomy so I guess that's almost as good. At least Nathan gave voice to my total disgust with Todd. I guess the original Nathan's pining for Joe went nowhere. And as fun as the original Dylan character was, I agree with Lane that his talents can be channeled into something more constructive. One loose end: What of poor Chester? Maybe he became Andrew's communications guy? ;)
5/15/20, 2:32 AM
OMG, I'm shedding a few tears at the ending. Truly an amazing piece of work between the two parts of this story. You've created the masterpiece and masterwork of this site with your partners. Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful piece with us.
5/15/20, 2:31 AM
Congratz on finishing your series, and good luck to your future endeavors.
Anonymous
5/15/20, 2:28 AM
So hooot. both chapters are. Cant wait to see what other trouble they get into :P. maybe all 3 can have some fuun together :).
5/15/20, 2:08 AM
SO HAPPY YOU'RE BACK!
5/15/20, 2:08 AM
Well played, Master Swizzington, well played!! Better than an ace coming on the river; bravo, sir, bravo!!!!
Anonymous
5/15/20, 1:58 AM
whoa so fucking hot! cant believe we got a new againstmywill story! i absolutely love the breakdown of the boyfriend and the humiliation involved! i honestly wish this story had gone on a lit longer. and while im not totally into the scat aspect it works here as a means of complete degradation. great to see you back hope there is more to come!
5/15/20, 1:27 AM
darn, I'm just happy that Todd just his just desserts. I do agree with Lane but I also feel bummed for Nathan. the vestiges of Todd's power and time as Chancellor still hang around and even if there's been considerable changes made for the betterment of everyone, it feels like Todd still succeeded and Nathan didn't get the whole 100% satisfaction of Justice/Revenge. Also, I would've really wanted to see Joey and Nate and I get that the story would probably never make them a couple in the traditional sense, because I don't think Joey will ever turn gay or get turned gay (until Zeiss, I guess), but I would've wanted construct Nathan to have kept his promise to true Nathan and see what that would've been. So that's why I maybe found it disappointing that Nathan had his memories wiped--I was hoping that he'd be actively in on Lane's plans moving forward, as in, he was conscious about it, so that maybe we could've gotten a scene with him and Joey. Maybe it's still a hang-up I had from the first installment--I hate seeing the good, sweet guy get fucked up like he had. and that I'm a sucker for a bit of romance or bestfriendship!! GUY-TO-GUY intimacy people pleaseeee! but TBH, even if these kinds of stories are not my cuppa at all, I LOVEEEEE how imaginative you are with your mindscapes and I am totally taking note on the sheer imagination and possibility of it as an interesting way to subjugate and submit!!