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5/15/20, 12:58 AM
I really loved the story... with all twists and turns... but I really want to see a better ending for Nathan... please
5/15/20, 12:56 AM
Must say, I'm happy to have kept reading even when things got a bit too dark for my taste. I loved the ending and Lane's initiative to use the telepaths' powers to make the world a better place. Definitively an amazing story!
Swizzington
5/15/20, 12:44 AM
You read fast, Moby! I have left Chester's precise fate deliberately ambiguous as it will be a plot point in the Zeiss sequel (if I ever get round to finishing it...) As for Nathan and Joe, alas, no. Joe is not gay :-)
Moby
5/15/20, 12:34 AM
This was an awesome story! Loved that Todd lost after the way he won in the last story and lorded it everyone. Now he's stuck in there watching himself become a better person and hating every second of it. A fitting punishment (Also, I might have been reading too much into it, but the goatee thing for Todd made me think that it was like a sign of his evil, like the mirror universe in Star Trek. And as soon as the new persona takes over, he shaves it when he starts to become better) Though I do have a few questions. What happened to Chester? Is he stuck like that or did Lane have Todd fix him? Also. Did Nathan and Joe hook up? Please tell me they did. Those two deserve some happiness
Moby
5/15/20, 12:26 AM
Oh shit. I thought Todd was going to loose, but I thought Lane would either just reverse everything or take control himself. This is a damn good twist!
5/14/20, 11:18 PM
I'm glad you didn't go full on slasher troupe with the big guy vs his former jock friends. The fact that the nerd has a good heart maybe the key reason why he deserves such a powerful and obedient soulmate. I'm looking forward to chapter two and to see how jock boys parents react to his MALE soulmate. So much for continuing the family name.
5/14/20, 10:17 PM
shiiiit thats
Anonymous
5/14/20, 8:15 PM
Hoping to read more about this story. Thanks.
5/14/20, 7:41 PM
Nice setup, excited for more!