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5/15/20, 1:27 AM
darn, I'm just happy that Todd just his just desserts. I do agree with Lane but I also feel bummed for Nathan. the vestiges of Todd's power and time as Chancellor still hang around and even if there's been considerable changes made for the betterment of everyone, it feels like Todd still succeeded and Nathan didn't get the whole 100% satisfaction of Justice/Revenge. Also, I would've really wanted to see Joey and Nate and I get that the story would probably never make them a couple in the traditional sense, because I don't think Joey will ever turn gay or get turned gay (until Zeiss, I guess), but I would've wanted construct Nathan to have kept his promise to true Nathan and see what that would've been. So that's why I maybe found it disappointing that Nathan had his memories wiped--I was hoping that he'd be actively in on Lane's plans moving forward, as in, he was conscious about it, so that maybe we could've gotten a scene with him and Joey. Maybe it's still a hang-up I had from the first installment--I hate seeing the good, sweet guy get fucked up like he had. and that I'm a sucker for a bit of romance or bestfriendship!! GUY-TO-GUY intimacy people pleaseeee! but TBH, even if these kinds of stories are not my cuppa at all, I LOVEEEEE how imaginative you are with your mindscapes and I am totally taking note on the sheer imagination and possibility of it as an interesting way to subjugate and submit!!
5/15/20, 1:21 AM
Nice. I can definitely say I did not see that coming! Nice twist!
5/15/20, 12:58 AM
I really loved the story... with all twists and turns... but I really want to see a better ending for Nathan... please
5/15/20, 12:56 AM
Must say, I'm happy to have kept reading even when things got a bit too dark for my taste. I loved the ending and Lane's initiative to use the telepaths' powers to make the world a better place. Definitively an amazing story!
Swizzington
5/15/20, 12:44 AM
You read fast, Moby! I have left Chester's precise fate deliberately ambiguous as it will be a plot point in the Zeiss sequel (if I ever get round to finishing it...) As for Nathan and Joe, alas, no. Joe is not gay :-)
Moby
5/15/20, 12:34 AM
This was an awesome story! Loved that Todd lost after the way he won in the last story and lorded it everyone. Now he's stuck in there watching himself become a better person and hating every second of it. A fitting punishment (Also, I might have been reading too much into it, but the goatee thing for Todd made me think that it was like a sign of his evil, like the mirror universe in Star Trek. And as soon as the new persona takes over, he shaves it when he starts to become better) Though I do have a few questions. What happened to Chester? Is he stuck like that or did Lane have Todd fix him? Also. Did Nathan and Joe hook up? Please tell me they did. Those two deserve some happiness
Moby
5/15/20, 12:26 AM
Oh shit. I thought Todd was going to loose, but I thought Lane would either just reverse everything or take control himself. This is a damn good twist!
5/14/20, 11:18 PM
I'm glad you didn't go full on slasher troupe with the big guy vs his former jock friends. The fact that the nerd has a good heart maybe the key reason why he deserves such a powerful and obedient soulmate. I'm looking forward to chapter two and to see how jock boys parents react to his MALE soulmate. So much for continuing the family name.
5/14/20, 10:17 PM
shiiiit thats