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5/14/20, 11:06 AM
I...just can't wait for the next chapter. Haven't read such a good cop story in a while. this ticks all my boxes
5/14/20, 10:59 AM
Oh poor Travis. I understand the pressure he bore so many years due to experience. Something like betraying yourself. His finally getting relax from this suffering but immediately being kidnapped/converted somehow make me a little bit sad.
5/14/20, 10:56 AM
Here's an idea: the protagonist enters a yoga class for pregnant couples and changes it into a gay, all-out orgy!
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5/14/20, 10:46 AM
So can't wait for the next chapter. I love how you write. Straight to the point and precise. And always super hot !
5/14/20, 9:04 AM
LOL, I'm around! You can always find me in our [Discord](https://discord.gg/fmWFnhy) if you want an update on any of my stories. I sent the next chapter to the proofreaders a couple of weeks ago and heard back from some but not all of them. I'm guessing that with the whole COVID-19 thing, some of them probably have other priorities at the moment. I'm just going through the chapter a final time, and if I haven't heard back from anyone else by then, I'll post it.
5/14/20, 7:34 AM
thanks for pointing it out, fully understand now
5/14/20, 7:16 AM
I called it 'sidewalk' because it was from the point of view of Cody, who is Canadian. Glad you are enjoying the story.
5/14/20, 6:48 AM
I can't wait to read more pf this story. I have a feeling that the jock will be a lot more friendly to Chris from now on.
5/14/20, 6:37 AM
Love a good demon story. Hopefully we will more fun & sexy stuff next chapter.
5/14/20, 6:27 AM
Great start to the story, building up for other chapters, maybe we will see the techniques used in the mind control in future chapters. so far in the story you have involved 2 of my turn ons, rubber and skinhead. i did notice you called it a side walk, where in Britain its called a pavement. the club described, sound very much like a club that is situated behind mile end tube station. just as others have said i look forward to reading more of this story line. Thanks for writing it