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RobinHood70's super fan
5/14/20, 2:32 AM
Robin, please come back to us ~~~
5/14/20, 2:17 AM
I need more! This story is SO HOT! Awesome idea..keep it going!
Anonymous
5/14/20, 2:07 AM
This was fantastic. I gotta say, I love the mystery that remained by the end. You are a masterful writer
Anonymous
5/14/20, 12:57 AM
now that Punk master stole the officers uniform what he would wear? i suggest some crude parody of his uniform mabe a cheap plastic halloween cop costume or made it with old clothes from a second hand store
Anonymous
5/14/20, 12:25 AM
Love the turn this took with the role reversal and wearing the uniform. The idea of him stealing his position as cop is so fucking hot!
screamingmoist
5/14/20, 12:23 AM
Thanks! it was a fun one to write
NzDom
5/14/20, 12:18 AM
The only thing I don't like about this is that I have to wait for the next chapter Love how the punk is playing with the cop. The obliviousness is on point. If mind control is real this is exactly how I would like to use it Every chapter get me to orgasm. I guess now I'm just gonna reread the series over and over again. As I've been doing while waiting for the next chapter. Can't wait for Mikey to join the mind fucked cop
Anonymous
5/14/20, 12:07 AM
Excellent story line. I would read several more chapters of this. It is nice to have stories that contain erotic parts but do not rely on those to keep interest. Well done.
5/13/20, 11:50 PM
nycboot, Sorry for putting you out there in a couple of different ways. I started writing this while I was proctoring exams and before I knew I had this section of the story completed. I was working on part 2 to see if I could combine them together, but thought it better to start off with this and work through days as more cops come under Ari'Seth's control. So please don't feel any pressure from me and my story about completing the ending to *Bargain*; write at your own pace. I look forward to seeing what you come up for the ending. P.S.--Thank you for calling this part of the story lovely
nycboot
5/13/20, 11:09 PM
I'm the one who expressed a desire to complete **[Bargain](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newSeries/show/7680)** (which is one of my favorite stories). I know what will happen but with working from home (and 2 other stories in various states of completion), I wasn't planning on completing it anytime soon. But now that New Guy in Town has offered this lovely entry above, that should prompt me to get moving.