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May 13, 2020
5/13/20, 7:50 PM
Super hot story! Never thought about how regulated breathing could be used to bridge hypnosis and yoga to achieve a calmer (and more pliant state of mind). Great work!
5/13/20, 6:01 PM
Bush41, thank you; I really appreciate hearing that from you and everyone else. I'm glad that you like the uniform and I'm glad I could work it in to the story. Thank you for support; I hope you like the next chapters once I write and post them.
5/13/20, 5:44 PM
Thanks for the positive comments boi98229. I agree with more or less everything you said - all I can say is that episode 2 will dwell more on the actual transformations and mental processes of the protagonists.
5/13/20, 5:37 PM
Bargain remains one of my favorite stories on this site and Wishbone is one my favorite authors. I'm very excited to see you take this and expand part of his story and universe. The uniform is brilliant and the writing is very good. I love the imagery and you're staying true to Wishbone's version and vision. I'm very much looking forward to where this continues in the future.
5/13/20, 5:37 PM
can't wait to see where this goes!
5/13/20, 4:56 PM
Kyle, thank you; those two chapters are my favorite. wishbone created a unique world with his story; I'm glad that you and others like my expansion of the story.
boi98229
5/13/20, 4:36 PM
Hi! First let me thank you for your imagination, great story telling, good writing skills, and of course your interest in so many of the same kinks as me! On the critical side, even though this is fantasy, the premise that anyone should morally do the things Nerd is doing to his former flatmates bothers me, even if they were deserving of some form of commensurate retribution. The things that make a story like this really hot for me are primarily the detailed descriptions of the loss of control and/or seduction of the submissive by the Alpha -- both the mental processes and the techniques used for control. This story describes the plot and action well, and the reasons why Nerd felt justified in taking revenge, but does not (yet anyway) describe the thinking of Nerd as he exacts revenge years later or the drones as they are taken down. i am a little 'concerned' that the description of this process of domination and submission, which i so enjoy, will be limited as it was in this chapter to one short paragraph which describes Cody's awakening following his kidnapping and sedation. He wasn't even aware as he was kidnapped and sedated that this is what was happening, so the process there was very abbreviated as well. So, in spite of my criticisms based on my own personal preferences and fetishes, there is much to like and I am anxious to read more of your stories, so i am off now to do just that!! ;) Best wishes!
5/13/20, 3:46 PM
i'm a huge fan of The Bargain series and Ch 5 was one of my favorites along with the pastor chapter. Its nice to read a chapter the expands on the world that Wishbone created. You did a stellar job. Loved the uniform created from the demon seed!
Anonymous
5/13/20, 3:16 PM
great story... really enjoyed it... look forward to more writing!!!
5/13/20, 2:58 PM
Yes, let's go to the station and get enslaved along with the chief and every officer. Time for some degrading fun humiliation 👍