Recent Comments

5/13/20, 4:56 PM
Kyle, thank you; those two chapters are my favorite. wishbone created a unique world with his story; I'm glad that you and others like my expansion of the story.
boi98229
5/13/20, 4:36 PM
Hi! First let me thank you for your imagination, great story telling, good writing skills, and of course your interest in so many of the same kinks as me! On the critical side, even though this is fantasy, the premise that anyone should morally do the things Nerd is doing to his former flatmates bothers me, even if they were deserving of some form of commensurate retribution. The things that make a story like this really hot for me are primarily the detailed descriptions of the loss of control and/or seduction of the submissive by the Alpha -- both the mental processes and the techniques used for control. This story describes the plot and action well, and the reasons why Nerd felt justified in taking revenge, but does not (yet anyway) describe the thinking of Nerd as he exacts revenge years later or the drones as they are taken down. i am a little 'concerned' that the description of this process of domination and submission, which i so enjoy, will be limited as it was in this chapter to one short paragraph which describes Cody's awakening following his kidnapping and sedation. He wasn't even aware as he was kidnapped and sedated that this is what was happening, so the process there was very abbreviated as well. So, in spite of my criticisms based on my own personal preferences and fetishes, there is much to like and I am anxious to read more of your stories, so i am off now to do just that!! ;) Best wishes!
5/13/20, 3:46 PM
i'm a huge fan of The Bargain series and Ch 5 was one of my favorites along with the pastor chapter. Its nice to read a chapter the expands on the world that Wishbone created. You did a stellar job. Loved the uniform created from the demon seed!
Anonymous
5/13/20, 3:16 PM
great story... really enjoyed it... look forward to more writing!!!
5/13/20, 2:58 PM
Yes, let's go to the station and get enslaved along with the chief and every officer. Time for some degrading fun humiliation 👍
5/13/20, 2:56 PM
Yes, let's go to the station and get enslaved along with the chief and every officer there. Time for some degrading, humiliating fun activities
5/13/20, 2:24 PM
thank you, and I hope so too
5/13/20, 1:28 PM
nycboot has said he wants to write the ending, so I'm yielding to him and focusing on the angle of the story I really like instead. (Hope he's not upset about me putting that out there.)
Anonymous
5/13/20, 12:52 PM
More dad slave... i think Ted and Brian should be Colins enforcers now.
Anonymous
5/13/20, 12:39 PM
please make him a slave, this is so hot