Recent Comments

AJX
5/12/20, 2:58 PM
Omg yes 5-stars and definitely needs a day-by-day series. This hotel fantasy is just perfect right now. Each room could do something different to new people, would love to see the tops and how they evolve, etc. Really appreciate your writing and hoping for more :)
Doug Kent
5/12/20, 2:08 PM
another chapter
5/12/20, 1:15 PM
I agree with Hypnothrill; the pace of this leg of the story was rushed. You could have taken the time to draw the conversion out. But you have a good story with potential so please continue writing this story.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 1:14 PM
I'm confused.
Ng5hvlo4
5/12/20, 1:06 PM
Chapter 2 includes part of the explanation, something that I will be revealing over the course of the series A working draft of Chapter 2 is available on Patreon
Anonymous
5/12/20, 1:03 PM
Yes It's a slow boil leading to really hot! But . . . the why is uncertain, and for me, that leaves a hole in the story. Maybe next installment will explain.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 1:00 PM
It's going to be sad to see this series end. Dylan is probably my most favorite mind-controlled character. His fall from power and the revelation that deep inside he is submissive is such a turn on. I hope we get more on him in the last chapters.
Willie Cici
5/12/20, 12:50 PM
Another great example of writer myopia. I never saw this as sequel potential. Two comments say 'sequel'. Ideas are welcome.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 12:48 PM
This has potential. Keep going!!!
Anonymous
5/12/20, 11:44 AM
Fuck this is way too good. Please keep on writing more !