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Ng5hvlo4
5/12/20, 1:06 PM
Chapter 2 includes part of the explanation, something that I will be revealing over the course of the series A working draft of Chapter 2 is available on Patreon
Anonymous
5/12/20, 1:03 PM
Yes It's a slow boil leading to really hot! But . . . the why is uncertain, and for me, that leaves a hole in the story. Maybe next installment will explain.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 1:00 PM
It's going to be sad to see this series end. Dylan is probably my most favorite mind-controlled character. His fall from power and the revelation that deep inside he is submissive is such a turn on. I hope we get more on him in the last chapters.
Willie Cici
5/12/20, 12:50 PM
Another great example of writer myopia. I never saw this as sequel potential. Two comments say 'sequel'. Ideas are welcome.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 12:48 PM
This has potential. Keep going!!!
Anonymous
5/12/20, 11:44 AM
Fuck this is way too good. Please keep on writing more !
5/12/20, 10:16 AM
yes,more of the slave dad Brian's dad next
5/12/20, 10:09 AM
Based on what we know Nathan has to get out back together as is described in the Zeiss story that's yet to come. so is obvious with all the lines that's mentioned in that chapter that Nathan is Todd's full on loyal slave once again. So the powers might work and subdue the real Nathan for the one that is created to lock him back away. Either way something had to be done to make that plot point stick as you've already mentioned it also you have to add the fact he's more playful as the original epilogue shows him being more care free with Joe washing windows.
5/12/20, 10:01 AM
this is a nice, underrated series. the chapters feel quite short though. maybe you could expand on the characters and mind control a bit? I really enjoy this one
5/12/20, 9:56 AM
Still a super-hot story. My one complaint was that everything was happening so quickly; I wanted a slightly slower pace to help build suspense and give us more details of the men's mental conversion.