Recent Comments

Doug Kent
5/12/20, 2:08 PM
another chapter
5/12/20, 1:15 PM
I agree with Hypnothrill; the pace of this leg of the story was rushed. You could have taken the time to draw the conversion out. But you have a good story with potential so please continue writing this story.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 1:14 PM
I'm confused.
Ng5hvlo4
5/12/20, 1:06 PM
Chapter 2 includes part of the explanation, something that I will be revealing over the course of the series A working draft of Chapter 2 is available on Patreon
Anonymous
5/12/20, 1:03 PM
Yes It's a slow boil leading to really hot! But . . . the why is uncertain, and for me, that leaves a hole in the story. Maybe next installment will explain.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 1:00 PM
It's going to be sad to see this series end. Dylan is probably my most favorite mind-controlled character. His fall from power and the revelation that deep inside he is submissive is such a turn on. I hope we get more on him in the last chapters.
Willie Cici
5/12/20, 12:50 PM
Another great example of writer myopia. I never saw this as sequel potential. Two comments say 'sequel'. Ideas are welcome.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 12:48 PM
This has potential. Keep going!!!
Anonymous
5/12/20, 11:44 AM
Fuck this is way too good. Please keep on writing more !
5/12/20, 10:16 AM
yes,more of the slave dad Brian's dad next