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Malemann54
5/12/20, 6:12 AM
Love this story reminded of Texzilla's Barber series, one of the first transformation stories i read.
5/12/20, 5:43 AM
A really twisted concept.
Jimmy M
5/12/20, 5:16 AM
Great chapter! Keep them coming!
Anonymous
5/12/20, 5:09 AM
Very hot and I love how the cop's obliviousness was handled. More please!
5/12/20, 4:41 AM
I love it. you should make a sequel.
5/12/20, 4:38 AM
Will there be more? It's so well written and fantastic!
5/12/20, 4:12 AM
Thanks everyone for the feedback! Some of those questions will be answered in the following chapters (Got 4 written so far! I don't want to say much to avoid spoilers, though.) I'm happy to see you enjoyed this first chapter! Next one should come out here in some days!
Swizzington
5/12/20, 3:07 AM
Agree. The obliviousness is great!
Anonymous
5/12/20, 3:04 AM
The obliviousness is beautifully done. Eagerly awaiting part 2!
5/12/20, 2:39 AM
I like Nathan's freezing powers, it has potential use in the future. If only he could use it in more sexual ways. Anyway, I'm curious to see how it all ends.