Recent Comments

5/12/20, 4:12 AM
Thanks everyone for the feedback! Some of those questions will be answered in the following chapters (Got 4 written so far! I don't want to say much to avoid spoilers, though.) I'm happy to see you enjoyed this first chapter! Next one should come out here in some days!
Swizzington
5/12/20, 3:07 AM
Agree. The obliviousness is great!
Anonymous
5/12/20, 3:04 AM
The obliviousness is beautifully done. Eagerly awaiting part 2!
5/12/20, 2:39 AM
I like Nathan's freezing powers, it has potential use in the future. If only he could use it in more sexual ways. Anyway, I'm curious to see how it all ends.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 2:36 AM
Funny and hot!!
Svplgsmslm
5/12/20, 2:19 AM
Once went to Chicago and was supposed to stay at the Westin but client's secretary sent me to the Best Western. Not the same outcome as this was reality of course, but there was a lot going on in the rooms
5/12/20, 1:02 AM
great new chapter
Anonymous
5/12/20, 12:16 AM
I LOVE how Nathan search for straight in Joe. How hard he fight to free him. That only breaks my hearth to know that wont be possible, but still i like it
Swizzington
5/12/20, 12:07 AM
It may take me a little longer to get the finale up because I am going to release chapters 9 & 10 simultaneously. Chapter 10 is just an epilogue/'where are they now' thing so it would be kinda lame to have to wait longer for that following the DRAMA of chapter 9 :-)
nycboot
5/12/20, 12:05 AM
Wow. I didn't think you could evoke the emotions in the sequences with Lane's dad and Drew. That was really something - bravo, really moving. And the tiny glimmer of Nathan - after way too many enslavements - stands in stark and very welcomed contrast. I'm just wondering why Lane has given up on Chester, especially when he has one pair of glasses left. And gee, Todd is so unstable - maybe he'll have a nervous breakdown that will permanently disable his brain? Also: was it your intention to draw a parallel to particular autocratic leaders?