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5/12/20, 5:43 AM
A really twisted concept.
Jimmy M
5/12/20, 5:16 AM
Great chapter! Keep them coming!
Anonymous
5/12/20, 5:09 AM
Very hot and I love how the cop's obliviousness was handled. More please!
5/12/20, 4:41 AM
I love it. you should make a sequel.
5/12/20, 4:38 AM
Will there be more? It's so well written and fantastic!
5/12/20, 4:12 AM
Thanks everyone for the feedback! Some of those questions will be answered in the following chapters (Got 4 written so far! I don't want to say much to avoid spoilers, though.) I'm happy to see you enjoyed this first chapter! Next one should come out here in some days!
Swizzington
5/12/20, 3:07 AM
Agree. The obliviousness is great!
Anonymous
5/12/20, 3:04 AM
The obliviousness is beautifully done. Eagerly awaiting part 2!
5/12/20, 2:39 AM
I like Nathan's freezing powers, it has potential use in the future. If only he could use it in more sexual ways. Anyway, I'm curious to see how it all ends.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 2:36 AM
Funny and hot!!