Recent Comments

5/12/20, 4:38 AM
Will there be more? It's so well written and fantastic!
5/12/20, 4:12 AM
Thanks everyone for the feedback! Some of those questions will be answered in the following chapters (Got 4 written so far! I don't want to say much to avoid spoilers, though.) I'm happy to see you enjoyed this first chapter! Next one should come out here in some days!
Swizzington
5/12/20, 3:07 AM
Agree. The obliviousness is great!
Anonymous
5/12/20, 3:04 AM
The obliviousness is beautifully done. Eagerly awaiting part 2!
5/12/20, 2:39 AM
I like Nathan's freezing powers, it has potential use in the future. If only he could use it in more sexual ways. Anyway, I'm curious to see how it all ends.
Anonymous
5/12/20, 2:36 AM
Funny and hot!!
Svplgsmslm
5/12/20, 2:19 AM
Once went to Chicago and was supposed to stay at the Westin but client's secretary sent me to the Best Western. Not the same outcome as this was reality of course, but there was a lot going on in the rooms
5/12/20, 1:02 AM
great new chapter
Anonymous
5/12/20, 12:16 AM
I LOVE how Nathan search for straight in Joe. How hard he fight to free him. That only breaks my hearth to know that wont be possible, but still i like it
Swizzington
5/12/20, 12:07 AM
It may take me a little longer to get the finale up because I am going to release chapters 9 & 10 simultaneously. Chapter 10 is just an epilogue/'where are they now' thing so it would be kinda lame to have to wait longer for that following the DRAMA of chapter 9 :-)