Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/11/20, 11:10 PM
Excellent
Anonymous
5/11/20, 11:04 PM
This was so hot! I have a total thing for guy's whose nips poke through their shirt, so I definitely enjoyed this :)
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/11/20, 10:33 PM
A 5 star rating on Tripadvisor for this place.
5/11/20, 10:25 PM
Interesting and promising. To me something is off in the flow of the first nine lines or so (the normal day and the meta bit about people involved in the story) but the rest of it is good. Combining a few paragraphs might have made sense, but, to me at least, the short paragraphs mostly give a nice flavor to the narrator's voice. A cynical narrator and a jock puppy werewolf in what seems to be a sweet tale is a very promising combination. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Anonymous
5/11/20, 10:11 PM
Love to see Baker transform his friend into another black knight!!
5/11/20, 8:51 PM
Genial ver qué está historia continua, me gusta esta nueva dirección que todo está tomando! Sigue con el buen trabajo
Stephen
5/11/20, 8:15 PM
Awesome beginning. Thanks for sharing this idea!
jockedguy
5/11/20, 5:23 PM
Thanks to everyone for reading. This might be the conclusion to the story. There may be one more chapter, but I'm not sure yet. We'll have to see.
nycboot
5/11/20, 4:36 PM
What's so interesting is that you've switched the expected reaction to two different types: 1. One expects a jock to be dumb, pushy and straight; and this guy seems to be very sweet 2. One expects a werewolf to be terrifying and always mean; this guy is the opposite. I guess we have to wait until the full moon.
5/11/20, 4:24 PM
This was excellent, bro! I loved the way we got into the MIB's head.