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Swizzington
5/10/20, 3:40 PM
Zi19, while you are correct that this story is set before the epilogue, the only thing I will say (so as not to spoil things) is that I would not have written this story if everything were destined to entirely go back the same as it was at the end of the original SA :-) Alas, I will not be covering the police department takeover in any great detail. I have already covered that ground (the takeover of a small town police department) in a previous story series and it would be tiresome for me to do something so similar again :-D Besides, I am already 3 chapters in to my next project and I am focusing on that!
5/10/20, 3:14 PM
@ everyone in the comments who are hoping that OG Nathan will win, or that they'll be free from Todd, you guys do realise that this series is set before the epilogue in the original series right? Lane (and Chester) are destined to lose since chapter one lol. I guess I'm just care about how Nathan will bury his original consciousness again now. Although this does make me even more curious: why is Zeiss (going to be) asking for Chester when he's currently mindless?
5/10/20, 2:02 PM
Dude has definitely passed something on to Chuck and Dave. I've got a few mental outlines of where this is going but I don't want to jump right too it. I'm thinking of taking this in an Mpreg+hive direction eventually with the nanites completely rewriting male biology, but I don't want it to be obvious to the characters until later. I'll keep it a community story so if people are meh on that they can write something else in this context, but I'm hoping to make it hot and interesting once i get there. In the meantime it's fun writing about these dudes getting off with each other :D
5/10/20, 1:50 PM
You're definitely setting yourself up here for plenty of great action to come! Will cum in his butt satisfy him as much as sucking a cock? Will his need for sperm increase? And, where did this "infection" come from? Is he passing it to others? Does he even know he is infected? Will he start investigating the source? Do you have a full plot line in mind, or are you just writing one chapter at a time to see where it takes you? Can't wait to see more! Thank you for writing!!
Anonymous
5/10/20, 1:44 PM
hot story!
5/10/20, 1:09 PM
Forgotten Candle, thanks for seconding the whole police and seeing Todd bring them to his will. I don't think Swizzington will get to that in the few chapters he has left but we can see if a side story can be written,
Anonymous
5/10/20, 10:37 AM
yes would love to see more also
5/10/20, 10:24 AM
I really loved this! I agree with the above commenter, it was a refreshing story and perspective (consensual, romantic), but still those fun themes of "theft"/size transfer and changing desires.
5/10/20, 9:57 AM
I don't really understand the first comment from anonymous criticizing your way of storytelling. I remember reading that this story should have 8 -it turned into 9- chapters so the whole endgame is still open. And I LOVE the twists and turns in this,it doesn't get boring or predictable for me. This would be a good TV series,btw 👍 P.S. I want to join in on all the others before me who want to hear about the cops, please
5/10/20, 9:06 AM
Oh no! Poor Dylan. Poor Lane. But if I've learned anything from you, Swizzington, it's that surprises are always around the corner!