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Elm
5/10/20, 4:43 AM
Woah, great story bro
5/10/20, 4:00 AM
This was a great story. I enjoy a romantic story of role reversal, particularly one without malice which is a refreshing change of pace. I kept mentally preparing myself for Alex to be a incubus himself, knowingly or otherwise, cause it would have explained why he was different, unaffected, etc. I think it works without that but that seemed like the natural direction, that he was perhaps just using Sifrid as a way to bulk up without having to do the work of seeking out men himself. In any event, it worked all the same and to be honest it was nice that he didn't have ulterior motives.
5/10/20, 3:39 AM
It's not going to be like that; Nacho is torn up about the events in Slave Academy, so no way he's going to do something like that.
5/10/20, 2:42 AM
Please let this not be another Slave Academy. I don't want cliffhangers, I want... loooove.❤️
Anonymous
5/10/20, 2:33 AM
Awesome story. I want to work for a big muscle daddy Sterling type, haha.
Swizzington
5/10/20, 2:24 AM
Not sure. The next chapter is quite short so I might push it out tomorrow. But no promises :-) I intend to release chapter 9 and 10 at the same time, because chapter 10 is just an epilogue, basically.
5/10/20, 2:22 AM
So when should we expect the new chapter to come out? Thinking every other day still?
Swizzington
5/10/20, 2:06 AM
It was not a deliberate reference, no. But I can see why you'd say that! I hadn't consciously made the connection but I guess it's not too surprising; when you write so much stuff, eventually the same themes/ideas will crop up again every now and then :-)
nycboot
5/10/20, 1:41 AM
Thank you for returning to the origination of your story in bringing back Nathan to the fore. Although the real Nathan is still struggling, you previously dropped two major hints about him: 1) of all the telepaths in the story, Nathan is the only one who was able to accomplish it without physical touch - as observed by Dylan. Thus, of all of them, Nathan is the strongest. Todd obviously knows this, which is why he tries to keep Nathan closest to him. I'm wondering why the real Nathan is not summoning those powers. Perhaps he's too inexperienced. (Then again, it often seems to be the nature of much fiction and film that the audience knows more than the characters and are constantly thinking "You idiot! Just do xyz and your troubles will be solved!") 2) Although you were very sympathetic to Nathan at the outset, the style of your writing strongly suggests you are most partial to Dylan. Perhaps I'm projecting from my experience from such people: they are always rebels, always non-conforming. Even though he was under Todd's spell, at this point he's a bit too washed out. Am I right in thinking that you were referencing your Good Boy story when you wrote this passage: "The first rule of being a good boy, is to always, always obey your master's instructions" ?
May 7, 2020
5/10/20, 1:07 AM
One of the best stories I have read on here for a while - so hot - thank you!