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5/10/20, 2:42 AM
Please let this not be another Slave Academy. I don't want cliffhangers, I want... loooove.❤️
Anonymous
5/10/20, 2:33 AM
Awesome story. I want to work for a big muscle daddy Sterling type, haha.
Swizzington
5/10/20, 2:24 AM
Not sure. The next chapter is quite short so I might push it out tomorrow. But no promises :-) I intend to release chapter 9 and 10 at the same time, because chapter 10 is just an epilogue, basically.
5/10/20, 2:22 AM
So when should we expect the new chapter to come out? Thinking every other day still?
Swizzington
5/10/20, 2:06 AM
It was not a deliberate reference, no. But I can see why you'd say that! I hadn't consciously made the connection but I guess it's not too surprising; when you write so much stuff, eventually the same themes/ideas will crop up again every now and then :-)
nycboot
5/10/20, 1:41 AM
Thank you for returning to the origination of your story in bringing back Nathan to the fore. Although the real Nathan is still struggling, you previously dropped two major hints about him: 1) of all the telepaths in the story, Nathan is the only one who was able to accomplish it without physical touch - as observed by Dylan. Thus, of all of them, Nathan is the strongest. Todd obviously knows this, which is why he tries to keep Nathan closest to him. I'm wondering why the real Nathan is not summoning those powers. Perhaps he's too inexperienced. (Then again, it often seems to be the nature of much fiction and film that the audience knows more than the characters and are constantly thinking "You idiot! Just do xyz and your troubles will be solved!") 2) Although you were very sympathetic to Nathan at the outset, the style of your writing strongly suggests you are most partial to Dylan. Perhaps I'm projecting from my experience from such people: they are always rebels, always non-conforming. Even though he was under Todd's spell, at this point he's a bit too washed out. Am I right in thinking that you were referencing your Good Boy story when you wrote this passage: "The first rule of being a good boy, is to always, always obey your master's instructions" ?
May 7, 2020
5/10/20, 1:07 AM
One of the best stories I have read on here for a while - so hot - thank you!
5/9/20, 11:35 PM
i just like that joe was back. good chapter. Id love a flashback of enslaving the cops.
Swizzington
5/9/20, 11:32 PM
So I looked over chapter 10 of the original SA to see if I was going crazy. It was never stated that they *couldn't* undo Nathan's situation, and it was never my intention to give the reader that idea. Dylan does say it is necessary to create a new personality in order for Nathan's body to function, that is true, but that doesn't necessarily imply that he can't free him. He just chose not to, in order to ensure Nathan's obedience going forward. The alternative would be to free him and continue mind battling, and it was not in Dylan's interests to do that at the time, so they just left him there :-) Hopefully that clarifies things for you!
5/9/20, 11:24 PM
I loved this chapter, you’re a amazing writer!! Will you make some more ‘stacy’s dad’ chapters as well soon?