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5/9/20, 8:59 PM
Man, Swizzington, you definitely know how to write a rollercoaster story there. The ups and downs, highs and lows, they were all there. It was enjoyable and left us at a very dark moment. But not everything is over. O.G. Nathan is free and Academy Nathan might not be able to hold him down forever (the Legion fan in me holds out for the eventual breakout of O.G. Nathan from whatever mental prison he's in). I'm not like Mr. Anonymous there; I see your story like a game of craps, so far we've have some wins and some losses but the seven-out hasn't hit yet. There's still a chance the point (i.e. good guys winning) can be made, but if the seven-out (Todd winning) comes, it's a loss but won't break the bank overall. Keep going; I'm waiting to see the outcome. P.S. - I personally got a kick of learning that Todd did take over the police force; knowing that has happened has made the outcome a coin flip that I'm happy either way it lands.
Anonymous
5/9/20, 8:18 PM
I saw this coming and now pissed. I knew Todd was going to win but you really had to fucking do this. I am just gonna give up on this series. You can write I will give you that but the story is just not good.
5/9/20, 7:57 PM
This series is one of the hottest things I've ever read, thanks for sharing it
5/9/20, 7:33 PM
Bro, hella hot, bro!
5/9/20, 7:31 PM
that's hot, bro!
5/9/20, 7:28 PM
as a music student, this hit all the right buttons. good job!
5/9/20, 7:16 PM
my favorite chapter until now! Love it!
5/9/20, 6:58 PM
Hot! I wish there were more to it afterward, but I liked it!
5/9/20, 6:58 PM
Huh, I hardly ever think of real-life analogues for my characters. There's a porn dude on a certain fetish video site (whose name will get this story moved to the moderated category) who is close to my idea of Sterling, and Zach's just everyone's friendly high school crush five years later. If you know a grinny cute dude with a bit of chest hair, be sure to recommend him. (And date him, if possible! Grinny cute dudes need love too.) :)