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5/9/20, 7:31 PM
that's hot, bro!
5/9/20, 7:28 PM
as a music student, this hit all the right buttons. good job!
5/9/20, 7:16 PM
my favorite chapter until now! Love it!
5/9/20, 6:58 PM
Hot! I wish there were more to it afterward, but I liked it!
5/9/20, 6:58 PM
Huh, I hardly ever think of real-life analogues for my characters. There's a porn dude on a certain fetish video site (whose name will get this story moved to the moderated category) who is close to my idea of Sterling, and Zach's just everyone's friendly high school crush five years later. If you know a grinny cute dude with a bit of chest hair, be sure to recommend him. (And date him, if possible! Grinny cute dudes need love too.) :)
5/9/20, 6:49 PM
Good Christ how do you singlehandedly reignite my libido like that? Riveting from beginning to end. Any fantasy model suggestions? Tony seems pretty obviously to be thehotgymnast in his prime, and Applegate feels like an Al Pacino in his late age long hair and goatee phase. But what about Zach and Sterling?
Anonymous
5/9/20, 6:16 PM
terrific gets better and better thanks
Anonymous
5/9/20, 4:56 PM
Ok,now things are getting interesting..........
Martin
5/9/20, 4:35 PM
Paisa, I would recommend that you start a new series from scratch if you're intention is to reboot it.
5/9/20, 3:57 PM
Cant wait for the next chapter!!