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5/8/20, 9:23 PM
Interesting story. If you continue it, I will gladly read it :) Keep up more cigar smoking avengers ;)
5/8/20, 9:23 PM
Not only can you write Marvel hypno-fiction, you can write Lovecraft theme fiction as well. Man, I'm feeling a bit guilty for asking for the Symbiote to make my story.
5/8/20, 9:13 PM
First Spiderman and now Captain American and the Winter Soldier (+ Iron Man); your talent seems to know no bounds.
5/8/20, 9:08 PM
Welcome back, and what a comeback you have among three stories!!!
5/8/20, 8:47 PM
Bro, need more bro stories, bro!
5/8/20, 7:46 PM
I hope there will be continuation. And I hope that the hypnotist get more worship from his boys.
5/8/20, 7:38 PM
Brodacious
May 4, 2020
5/8/20, 7:35 PM
Awesome story, I love how the bully hates what he has to do. I hope there will be even more humiliation. And I really hope that there are some other bullies who need to be disciplined by Nate!
Thom
5/8/20, 7:22 PM
Still waiting on this to happen to me, why must fate be so cruel. Another hot entry as usual, bro.
5/8/20, 6:44 PM
While its true that the events of the six chapters took place in the span of a few hours, the entire sequel is 2/3 close to being done already and for me, Lane has not risen to the occasion and proven himself capable of causing any real damage. So in the event that he does end up coming out on top somehow, it will feel like he only got there through a fluke since that's the only thing thats been happening to Lane as of now. Maybe I'm wrong and maybe Swizz is cooking up something in his later chapters that will make me eat my words (and I won't be surprised if that ends up being the case.) But as it stands, Lane's actions aint cutting it for me and it he doesn't earn any victory points for just stumbling upon Chester's invention and following his instructions.