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5/8/20, 12:07 PM
INCREDIBLE! Your rich descriptions of the lighthouse and beautiful language made me feel like I was really there, and the power of Cthulhu was real, too. Amazing job!
nycboot
5/8/20, 11:11 AM
Kyle Chu: but reread how Lane is introduced. He is *never* painted as all-positive, but just as power-hungry as Todd. I'm all for Lane's cause of freeing up people, and he's that tool in the narrative. But his personality is driven by selfishness and self-aggrandizement. That's why I fear he's going to end up like Ethan of the Good Boy story. In a sense, this kind of chain-link corruption is the story of our times, is it not?
5/8/20, 10:29 AM
I'm almost positive this season finale will end on a cliffhanger involving the chip if that makes you feel
hypnoslut
5/8/20, 10:28 AM
Gotta love some Cthulhu mythos in the morning.
Anonymous
5/8/20, 10:06 AM
very hot and well written... as a comment i would say that the plot arc of the chip got quite lost a long time ago... which is a shame. i thought the chapter would end with the cliffhanger of someone finding out that Joey had installed a chip to Coach as well... that would have been a bit of a twist. but hey, i wont complain... very HOT chapter and over all, story
5/8/20, 9:42 AM
As Always another HypnoCigarBoy hit
5/8/20, 9:34 AM
I would love to see the Bucky perspective or the Tony perspective. Great alternative universe
5/8/20, 9:16 AM
Thank you for this
5/8/20, 9:14 AM
That was very hot. Thank you for this.
Anonymous
5/8/20, 9:13 AM
Excellent