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5/8/20, 8:02 AM
When I first wrote the first chapter, I was thinking of making this a one-shot kind of thing. Then there was a huge response and I added some new chapters. Now that I technically finished writing the first part of "The Chip" (Chapter 20 will be uploaded Friday for those of you that have been keeping up with it *thank you so much*), I'm trying to jump back into this story and looking at the comments... y'all were real thirsty for Phil and Roger lol I haven't thought at all about this story and re-reading these chapters, I can easily say that this story is not going to be 20 chapters long. Nevertheless, I want to close this story off with some additional chapter(s) but I'm not inspired at all. So this is where y'all come in... HELP lol What are some things y'all would like for Phil and Roger to do besides the already stated 'make Phil act like the girlfriend' and 'it would be great for them to move to europe.' Where are my kinksters at? What can Roger and Phil explore at the lake house? Let me know your thoughts. I'll more than likely not write on this story until after I upload chapter 20 of "The Chip" so there's time for suggestions and ideas. For the essential workers working in the morning, thank you. For everyone else that's stuck at home like me, stay safe and practice self-care.
5/8/20, 7:45 AM
Amazingly hot story, no one does spiderman corruption quite like you do! Keep up the hard work, can't wait for chapter 2!
5/8/20, 7:44 AM
Ever since finding this site I have always always always loved the stories and series you wrote! Please continue this story as I know already its going to be one that I am going to bookmark and keep coming back to!
5/8/20, 6:19 AM
I love a good Lovecraft pastiche, and I thought you did a great job with this one. I'd be really curious to see what happens when Jonah returns to Innsmouth!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/8/20, 5:13 AM
damned hot!
5/8/20, 5:03 AM
Sweet fucking jaysus, this is the hottest installment yet. Mad props, bro.
May 7, 2020
5/8/20, 4:32 AM
This is utterly twisted, and incredibly hot. Thanks for letting us into your your depraved mind.
Moby
5/8/20, 3:45 AM
Amazing. I think Dylan is gonna win. He has beaten Nathan before
5/8/20, 3:34 AM
@PupScout: I'm glad I could pass a word on to you. You're right to notice the ways boot camps or police academies work; they are breaking people's will down and rebuilding them as soldier/sailors/airmen/Marines/police officers. You've been a bit more hip to that particular game than I have as it appears in your stories, so you seeing that in the story is really nice to hear. Thank you for noticing the appreciation of the uniform. I really did want to go for the antithesis of disrobing; from your opinion I got the right tone which is good to hear. I'm not such a good writer of sex and sensuality, so I'm really happy to hear you liked the uniform being central to the transformation. Wow!! The author of the Submarine and Navy Seals Brothers actually would go to the infantry??!! Then that leaves the navy blue for me; definitely would sign up for navy if I had to enlist. But I'm honored that you commented on the story; thank you so much, PupScout.
5/8/20, 3:18 AM
It's one of those "move the plot forward" chapters. Not particularly my favorite as I find the action too chaotic. I like your more condensed chapters where the focus don't jump around on too many locations and scenes and we just follow one character's progression in the plot (i.e. Nathan's training, a specific victim's downfall, Todd's plotting, etc.) I also don't know how to feel about The Herald scene. It feels cartoonishly cliche for the bad guy to not be able to catch Lane considering that he managed to take over the place but still unable to incapacitate Lane despite the number of slaves he has at his disposal. It feels like Lane is getting away because the plot says hes not ready for the big battle. I just feel that Lane needs to have more skills I guess in order to be considered a worth adversary for Todd. Cuz right now, all his victories had been a stroke of luck (stealing the glasses by luck, not being reprimanded in the early chapters when he was sleuthing around the school). It wont make for a compelling ending if he somehow defeats Todd because so far, his major victories were not due to his own merit but through Chester's invention that he only came upon by some happenstance. He needs to prove himself as someone worthy! Still looking forward to the next chapter though, waiting for everything to come clashing together with the inevitable boom.