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5/8/20, 12:52 AM
I learned a new word today: doppelganger. Thanks for that. The uniform makes them obedient soldiers. In real life this is exactly what happens, but they join voluntarily, get a uniform , form a squad and start obeying. That this fantasy is so close to reality is super hot. Makes you wonder the mindset of our men in uniform, esp the super elite forces. And I loved how the uniform was so central. Wearing it well, looking like a man in it, respecting it, it was a nice transformation for him to consider and appreciate manliness. And then joining others with the same transformation. Now to answer the question I have been nagging myself with throughout this story. Desert? Urban? Navy Blue? or Olive Drab? I choose the Olive Drab Sir!
5/7/20, 11:43 PM
can't wait to read more
nycboot
5/7/20, 11:33 PM
Gads, another cliffhanger. This is one of the most satisfying chapters of this 2nd series. Bravo.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 11:20 PM
Bro-tastic !!!
5/7/20, 11:02 PM
Amazing! This story is starting to feel like a real spy thriller! I loved the chase scenes and the undercover work. I wonder who Lane will use those special glasses on? Chester? Todd himself? Oh, how exciting! :D
Anonymous
5/7/20, 11:00 PM
Just what I needed. Please upload the next chapter asap!!! I need to know what happens now
Swizzington
5/7/20, 10:55 PM
Apologies to any early readers. I was in such a hurry to get this part out that I missed a few typos in my final proofreading. Awkward! I think I've now fixed *most*, if not all, but if anyone sees a typo and would like me to fix it, please email me! I'd be very grateful :-)
bleuboy
5/7/20, 10:50 PM
Honestly love this series to bits. Do you have a Patreon by chance or are you planning on fixing this up a bit more and selling this as a little collection? Would like to purchase it as one someday when it's finished 😍
Hypnofun12
5/7/20, 10:36 PM
Ok the next chapter needs to come out asap. My heart is racing in anticipation. I have a feeling Dylan is going to go back under the control of Todd. I just know things are going to take a turn for the worse really quick. Gosh I know its gonna end bad and Todd's gonna win but dang I am loving the journey. Curse my pure heart! Haha
5/7/20, 10:00 PM
@Anonymous: The plan is to write four more chapters. After that who knows. @Swizzington: Thank you so much (said while fanboying out). I didn't think it added much but it was a reference back to the original story; I wanted there to be a few references in this story, because it's pretty much new ground after this.