Recent Comments

nycboot
5/7/20, 11:33 PM
Gads, another cliffhanger. This is one of the most satisfying chapters of this 2nd series. Bravo.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 11:20 PM
Bro-tastic !!!
5/7/20, 11:02 PM
Amazing! This story is starting to feel like a real spy thriller! I loved the chase scenes and the undercover work. I wonder who Lane will use those special glasses on? Chester? Todd himself? Oh, how exciting! :D
Anonymous
5/7/20, 11:00 PM
Just what I needed. Please upload the next chapter asap!!! I need to know what happens now
Swizzington
5/7/20, 10:55 PM
Apologies to any early readers. I was in such a hurry to get this part out that I missed a few typos in my final proofreading. Awkward! I think I've now fixed *most*, if not all, but if anyone sees a typo and would like me to fix it, please email me! I'd be very grateful :-)
bleuboy
5/7/20, 10:50 PM
Honestly love this series to bits. Do you have a Patreon by chance or are you planning on fixing this up a bit more and selling this as a little collection? Would like to purchase it as one someday when it's finished 😍
Hypnofun12
5/7/20, 10:36 PM
Ok the next chapter needs to come out asap. My heart is racing in anticipation. I have a feeling Dylan is going to go back under the control of Todd. I just know things are going to take a turn for the worse really quick. Gosh I know its gonna end bad and Todd's gonna win but dang I am loving the journey. Curse my pure heart! Haha
5/7/20, 10:00 PM
@Anonymous: The plan is to write four more chapters. After that who knows. @Swizzington: Thank you so much (said while fanboying out). I didn't think it added much but it was a reference back to the original story; I wanted there to be a few references in this story, because it's pretty much new ground after this.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 9:43 PM
This was so hot! I really like the dynamic you've got going on. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
5/7/20, 9:32 PM
I couldn't say whether or not I'll write any sequel yet as I didn't really write this with that in mind, however; I probably will try to do some more work on this. I want the transformation to be longer but I still haven't gotten the hang of doing that organically yet. It was especially difficult here because I wanted the conversation to feel natural and have a good banter.