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nycboot
5/8/20, 2:22 AM
Actually Swizz, since you've already alluded to a showdown....I'm wondering about a scene: Dylan has already released Nathan and they sneak up to Todd and stick both their fingers simultaneously at Todd's temple. Then follows a 3-way mindscape with the three of them arguing. If it could be as interesting as the Drew/Dylan scene, it might be something.
May 7, 2020
Anonymous
5/8/20, 2:19 AM
OOoooooo You can go so far with this, and I hope you do!!!
Anonymous
5/8/20, 2:16 AM
Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
5/8/20, 2:14 AM
Love when you get real specific about what there wearing bro. Bet all those bros smell good with all that flexing like sweat and stuff mixed with Axe and cheap colone...
5/8/20, 2:02 AM
I gotta admit, I'm extremely disappointed that you wrote 8 parts and never actually wrote the satisfying 'Alpha mating his bottom' anal sex scene. At the risk of sounding like a petty asshole, I can truly say I wish I hadn't wasted my time reading this. I would like to state for the record that I am in fact NOT an asshole, that's just truly the level of hurt I feel right now.
Anonymous
5/8/20, 1:19 AM
So hot. Thank you!
5/8/20, 12:52 AM
I learned a new word today: doppelganger. Thanks for that. The uniform makes them obedient soldiers. In real life this is exactly what happens, but they join voluntarily, get a uniform , form a squad and start obeying. That this fantasy is so close to reality is super hot. Makes you wonder the mindset of our men in uniform, esp the super elite forces. And I loved how the uniform was so central. Wearing it well, looking like a man in it, respecting it, it was a nice transformation for him to consider and appreciate manliness. And then joining others with the same transformation. Now to answer the question I have been nagging myself with throughout this story. Desert? Urban? Navy Blue? or Olive Drab? I choose the Olive Drab Sir!
5/7/20, 11:43 PM
can't wait to read more
nycboot
5/7/20, 11:33 PM
Gads, another cliffhanger. This is one of the most satisfying chapters of this 2nd series. Bravo.
Anonymous
5/7/20, 11:20 PM
Bro-tastic !!!