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5/7/20, 4:02 PM
Hi , O more please. A nerd like me, will be analysing it too. First I need to get a sample of the gel or is it biofreeze, in the cup. My be up the piss hole and Tyler, tell me what the f- is this? Please more. When is his cup coming off? Is Steve, going to be a easy install? So many question. great story, thank you, rob
5/7/20, 4:01 PM
This story could have been added to the 'Tales of the Pandemic' series, but I drafted it as the last in the 'Hitchhiker' series. Plus, if anyone sees the seed of a sequel in this story, e.g. the aliens going to SF, please make story suggestions.
nycboot
5/7/20, 3:54 PM
At first I was concerned with bestiality. But there's none of that. You've characterized the gorilla just as a simple and very sweet soul. Really touching story. :)
5/7/20, 3:05 PM
Fascinating story. Well constructed. Nice that the readers can fantasize on their own how the characters left after the game. I like that you gave a nice resolution to the previous two ring stories that were standing okay on their own. it shows that the characters learned their lesson. I would love to see more writing along this line with a new set of characters.
5/7/20, 1:57 PM
Thanks! I'm thinking of moving this into a few different spaces but the cum-addict thing turned out to be a surprisingly fun thing to write!
Cocksucker3000
5/7/20, 1:13 PM
As someone who's fucking obssessed with sucking dick, this satisfyied me, Well done!
5/7/20, 1:10 PM
so hot!!! Loved it all from the concept of an older daddy taking over an innocent boy to the body worship and piss drinking, please write some more this is a great start :)
Tass
5/7/20, 12:24 PM
like it a lot. change him some more, perhaps a crazy haircut, tattoos and piercings to go with the new look
5/7/20, 11:39 AM
Great start. Eager for more.
5/7/20, 11:39 AM
This is a really good starting point though a bit short. I personally seek out these kinds of stories. Will there be any continuity?